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Where's Your Thesis Statement and What Happened to Your Topic Sentences? Identifying Organizational Challenges in Undergraduate Student Argumentative Writing
Author(s) -
Miller Ryan T.,
Pessoa Silvia
Publication year - 2016
Publication title -
tesol journal
Language(s) - English
Resource type - Journals
SCImago Journal Rank - 0.468
H-Index - 14
eISSN - 1949-3533
pISSN - 1056-7941
DOI - 10.1002/tesj.248
Subject(s) - argumentative , theme (computing) , statement (logic) , consistency (knowledge bases) , academic writing , sentence , systemic functional linguistics , linguistics , psychology , categorization , automatic summarization , mathematics education , macro , pedagogy , computer science , artificial intelligence , philosophy , programming language , operating system
The authors examine the challenges students faced in trying to write organized texts using effective thesis statements and topic sentences by analyzing argumentative history essays written by multilingual students enrolled in an undergraduate history course. They use the notions of macro‐Theme (i.e., thesis statement) and hyper‐Theme (i.e., topic sentence) from systemic functional linguistics to categorize students' challenges constructing effective macro‐Themes and hyper‐Themes. They compare higher graded essays and lower graded essays at six time points during one semester. Both higher and lower graded essays showed challenges with the fronting, specificity, and consistency of their macro‐Themes and hyper‐Themes. However, there was improvement over the course of the semester. By identifying these challenges, the authors aim to help teachers and students develop a meta‐language to talk about these textual features of academic writing and thus enhance the teaching and writing of academic writing. They call for the need for explicit instruction to enhance students' organization of their ideas.